davids1 wrote:Hi Owen,
I glanced at the ".pdf" you created of Cathcart's article [and it looked
great to me]. What sort of "comments" were you "still hoping for?"
Best,
David
P.S. As an aside, since all I have is an Acrobat
reader, I always convert everything I am able, to an "rtf" format, so I can highlight and annotate it.
Hi Owen,
Okay, I took a closer look, and did find the following "formatting" errors/irregularities [if that is what you were "hoping for"]:
1) Under "
INTRODUCTION" [page 2] > third/last paragraph > last sentence: Last line could/should be combined into the line above;
2) Footnote [under chart on page 4] > second sentence beginning with "Perhaps" > could/should be moved back one space;
3) Page 5 > third [complete] sentence beginning with "Patients" > could/should be moved back one space;
4) Under "
INDIVIDUAL RESPONSES" [page 5] > third sentence beginning with "However" and fourth sentence beginning with "Admittedly" > could/should be moved back one space;
5) Under "
INDIVIDUAL RESPONSES" [page 5] > second paragraph > first sentence/second line > the words "had" and "nuisance" have to many spaces between them;
6) Page 6 > first [full] paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "frequently" and "underdose" have too many spaces between them;
7) Page 6 > first [full] paragraph > third sentence/fourth line > the words "especially" and "elderly" have too many spaces between them;
6) Page 6 > first [full] paragraph > fourth sentence/fifth line > the words "Additionally" and "patients" have too many spaces between them;
9) Page 6 > first [full] paragraph > fourth sentence/seventh line > the words "for" and "adequate" have too many spaces between them;
10) Under "
ANASCORBEMIA -- ACUTE INDUCED SCURVY" [page 6] > first paragraph > third sentence/fifth line > the words "disease" and "only" have too many spaces between them;
11) Page 7 > first paragraph > first sentence/second line > the words "and" and "bacterial" have too many spaces between them;
12) Page 7 > first paragraph > third sentence/fifth line > the words "hay" and "fever" have too many spaces between them;
13) Page 7 > first paragraph > fourth sentence/eighth line > the words "with" and "benefit" have too many spaces between them;
14) Page 7 > second paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "term" and "ANASCORBEMIA" have too many spaces between them;
15) Page 7 > third paragraph > the first sentence should be "closed up" between the words "other" and "substances;"
16) Page 7 > third paragraph > the first sentence/twelfth line [currently] > the words "or" and "degeneration" have too many spaces between them;
17) Page 7 > third paragraph > the first sentence/thirteenth line [currently] > the words "muscle" and "spasms" have too many spaces between them;
18) Page 7 > fourth paragraph > the first sentence should be "closed up" between the words "result" and "from" and "of" and "patients;"
19) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > second paragraph > third line > third sentence beginning with "For" could/should be moved back one space;
20) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > first sentence/second line > the words "fully" and "satisfying" have too many spaces between them;
21) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > first sentence/third line > the words "primary" and "disease" have too many spaces between them;
22) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > second sentence/fifth line > the words "had" and "to" have too many spaces between them;
23) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > sixth line > third sentence beginning with "In" could/should be moved back one space;
24) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > eighth line > fourth sentence beginning with "Admittedly" could/should be moved back one space;
25) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > fourth sentence/eighth line > the words "been" and "lucky" have too many spaces between them;
26) Under "
THE MISSING STRESS HORMONE" [page 8] > third paragraph > fifth sentence/eleventh line > the words "ascorbate" and "been" have too many spaces between them;
27) Under "
HEPATITIS" [page 9] > first paragraph > first line > second sentence beginning with "Cases" could/should be moved back one space;
28) Under "
HEPATITIS" [page 9] > first paragraph > seventh line > sixth sentence beginning with "The" could/should be moved back one space;
29) Under "
HEPATITIS" [page 9] > second paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "generally" and "takes" have too many spaces between them;
30) Under "
HEPATITIS" [page 9] > second paragraph > third sentence beginning with "Because" could/should be moved back one space;
31) Under "
HEPATITIS" [page 9] > second paragraph > third sentence/third line > the words "caused" and "by" have too many spaces between them;
31) Under "
HEPATITIS" [page 9] > second paragraph > fourth sentence/fifth line > the words "orally" and "despite" have too many spaces between them;
32) Under "
UNSICK" [page 9] > second paragraph > second sentence/second line > beginning with "If" could/should be moved back one space;
33) Under "
UNSICK" [page 9] > second paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "If" and "he" have too many spaces between them;
34) Under "
UNSICK" [page 9] > second paragraph > third sentence/third line > beginning with "He" could/should be moved back one space;
35) Under "
UNSICK" [page 9] > second paragraph > fourth sentence/fifth line > beginning with "I" could/should be moved back one space;
36) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > first paragraph > second sentence/fifth line > the words "more" and "sometimes" have too many spaces between them;
37) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > second paragraph > second sentence/second line > beginning with "Usually" could/should be moved back one space;
38) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > second paragraph > third sentence/third line > beginning with "Solutions" could/should be moved back one space;
39) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > second paragraph > fifth sentence/seventh line > beginning with "Inadequate" could/should be moved back one space;
39) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > second paragraph > sixth sentence/eighth line > beginning with "Quite" could/should be moved back one space;
40) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > second paragraph > seventh sentence/ninth line > beginning with "While" could/should be moved back one space;
41) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > first sentence/second line > the words "with" and "Ringer's" have too many spaces between them;
42) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > second sentence/third line > beginning with "I" could/should be moved back one space;
43) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > third sentence/fourth line > beginning with "Ascorbate" could/should be moved back one space;
44) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > third sentence/fifth line > the words "chemical" and "processes" have too many spaces between them;
45) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > fourth sentence/sixth line > beginning with "Doses" could/should be moved back one space;
46) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > fifth sentence/seventh line > beginning with "Rate" could/should be moved back one space;
47) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > sixth sentence/ninth line > beginning with "Local" could/should be moved back one space;
48) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > sixth sentence/ninth line > the words "is" and "relieved" have too many spaces between them;
49) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > third paragraph > seventh sentence/tenth line > beginning with "One" could/should be moved back one space;
50) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > fourth paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "suggests" and "that" have too many spaces between them;
51) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > fifth paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "Bowel" and "tolerance" have too many spaces between them;
52) Under "
INTRAVENOUS AND INTRAMUSCULAR ASCORBATE" [page 10] > fifth paragraph > third sentence/fourth line > the words "use" and "becaise" have too many spaces between them;
52) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > second sentence/first line > beginning with "The" could/should be moved back one space;
53) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "would" and "appear" have too many spaces between them;
54) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > third sentence/third line > beginning with "I" could/should be moved back one space;
55) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > third sentence/fifth line > the words "requiring" and "ampicillin" have too many spaces between them;
56) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > fourth sentence/sixth line > beginning with the word "Cephalosporins" could/should be moved back one space;
57) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > fifth sentence/seventh line > beginning with the word "The" could/should be moved back one space;
58) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > first paragraph > seventh sentence/eleventh line > beginning with the word "Some" could/should be moved back one space;
59) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > second paragraph > first sentence/second line > the words "basic" and "antibiotic" have too many spaces between them;
60) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > second paragraph > second sentence/third line > beginning with the word "If" could/should be moved back one space;
61) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > third paragraph > second sentence/third line > beginning with the word "Consultants" could/should be moved back one space;
62) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > third paragraph > third sentence/third line > beginning with the word "The" could/should be moved back one space;
63) Under "
BACTERIAL INFECTIONS" [page 11] > fifth paragraph > first sentence/second line > the words "the" and "infection" have too many spaces between them;
64) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 11] > the first sentence should not be separated by a page break;
65) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > second and third lines should be joined;
66) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > third line > sentence beginning with with the word "If" could/should be moved back one space;
67) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > fifth line > sentence beginning with with the word "I" could/should be moved back one space, and the sentence should not be separated between the words "had" and "developed;"
68) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > ninth line [currently] > sentence beginning with with the word "I" could/should be moved back one space;
69) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > first [full] paragraph on the page > second sentence/second line > beginning with with the word "I" could/should be moved back one space;
70) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > first [full] paragraph on the page > third sentence/fourth line > beginning with with the word "However" could/should be moved back one space;
71) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > third [full] paragraph on the page > second sentence/third line > beginning with with the word "If" could/should be moved back one space;
72) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > fourth [full] paragraph on the page > second sentence/second line > the words "season" and "otherwise" have too many spaces between them;
73) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > fourth [full] paragraph on the page > third sentence/second line > beginning with with the word "Many" could/should be moved back one space;
74) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > fourth [full] paragraph on the page > third sentence/fourth line > beginning with with the word "The" could/should be moved back one space;
75) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > fifth [full] paragraph on the page > second sentence/first line > beginning with with the word "A" could/should be moved back one space;
76) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 12] > fifth [full] paragraph on the page > third sentence/third line > beginning with with the word "So" could/should be moved back one space;
77) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 13] > first line > the words "ascorbate" and "when" have too many spaces between them;
78) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 13] > first [full] paragraph on the page > second sentence/third line > beginning with with the word "Immunologists" could/should be moved back one space;
79) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 13] > first [full] paragraph on the page > third sentence/fifth line > the words "anterioor" and "uveitis" have too many spaces between them;
80) Under "
VITAMIN C AND ALLERGY" [page 13] > first [full] paragraph on the page > second sentence/fifth line > beginning with with the word "All" could/should be moved back one space;
81) Under "
CANDIDA ALBICANS" [page 13] > second line > "simul" and "taneously" should be combined;
82) Under "
CANDIDA ALBICANS" [page 13] > second line > the sentence beginning with with the word "Ascorbic" could/should be moved back one space;
83) Under "
FUNGUS INFECTIONS" [page 13] > second line > the words "expereince" and "that" have too many spaces between them;
84) Under "
FUNGUS INFECTIONS" [page 13] > second sentence/third line > beginning with the word "Systemic" could/should be moved back one space;
85) Under "
FUNGUS INFECTIONS" [page 13] > second sentence/third line > beginning with the word "It" could/should be moved back one space;
86) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 13] > second sentence/third line > beginning with the word "Burns" could/should be moved back one space;
87) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > fourth line > the sentence beginning with the second word "The" could/should be moved back one space;
88) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > sixth line > the sentence beginning with the word "My" could/should be moved back one space;
89) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > first [full] paragraph > second sentence/second line > the sentence beginning with the word "Humans" could/should be moved back one space;
90) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > first [full] paragraph > third sentence/third line > the sentence beginning with the word "In" could/should be moved back one space;
91) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > first [full] paragraph > fourth sentence/fifth line > the sentence beginning with the word "I" could/should be moved back one space;
92) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > second [full] paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "to" and "vascular" have too many spaces between them;
93) Under "
TRAUMA, SURGERY, AND BURNS" [page 14] > second [full] paragraph > second sentence/fourth line > the words "steroid" and "production" have too many spaces between them;
94) Under "
CANCER" [page 14] > first line > the words "reasons" and "however" have too many spaces between them;
95) Under "
CANCER" [page 14] > third line > the sentence beginning with the word "Were" could/should be moved back one space;
96) Under "
CANCER" [page 14] > fourth line > the sentence beginning with the word "Ewan" could/should be moved back one space;
97) Under "
CANCER" [page 14] > sixth line > the sentence beginning with the word "He" could/should be moved back one space;
98) Under "
CANCER" [page 14] > eighth line > the sentence beginning with the word "Hopefully" could/should be moved back one space;
99) Under "
CANCER" [page 14] > eleventh line > the sentence beginning with the word "Ascorbate" could/should be moved back one space;
100) Second line [page 15] > the sentence beginning with the word "Clinical" could/should be moved back one space;
101) Under "
ARTHRITIS]" [pager 15] > second paragraph > first line > the sentence beginning with the word "Ascorbate" could/should be moved back one space;
102) Under "
ARTHRITIS]" [pager 15] > second paragraph > second, third, and fourth sentences should have their respective gaps eliminated;
103) Under "
SCARLET FEVER" [pager 15] > first sentence/second line > the words "responded" and "within" have too many spaces between them;
104) Under "
SCARLET FEVER" [pager 15] > second line > the sentence beginning with the word "I" could/should be moved back one space;
105) Under "
SCARLET FEVER" [pager 15] > second sentence/fourth line > the words "toxin" and "responsible" have too many spaces between them;
106) Under "
SCARLET FEVER" [pager 15] > fourth line > the sentence beginning with the word "Although" could/should be moved back one space;
107) Under "
HERPES: COLD SORES, GENITAL LESIONS, AND SHINGLES" [pager 15] > second line > the sentence beginning with the word "However" could/should be moved back one space;
108) Under "
HERPES: COLD SORES, GENITAL LESIONS, AND SHINGLES" [pager 15] > third line > the sentence beginning with the word "Zinc" could/should be moved back one space;
109) Under "
HERPES: COLD SORES, GENITAL LESIONS, AND SHINGLES" [pager 15] > third line > the words "herpes" and "however" have too many spaces between them;
110) Under "
CRIB DEATHS (SUDDEN INFANT DEATH SYNDROME)" [pager 16] > third line > the sentence beginning with the word "This" could/should be moved back one space;
111) Under "
CRIB DEATHS (SUDDEN INFANT DEATH SYNDROME)" [pager 16] > fourth line > the sentence beginning with the word "All" could/should be moved back one space;
112) Under "
MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > first paragraph > second line/second sentence > the words "if" and "there" have too many spaces between them;
113) Under "
MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > first paragraph > third line/second sentence > the words "sinuses" and "decrease" have too many spaces between them;
114) Under "
MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > first paragraph > third line/third sentence > the sentence beginning with the word "Should" could/should be moved back one space;
115) Under "
]MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > first paragraph > third line/third sentence > the words "chronic" and "problem" have too many spaces between them;
116) Under "
MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > second paragraph > first line > the sentence beginning with the word "If" could/should be moved back one space;
117) Under "
MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > second paragraph > second sentence/second line > the words "water" and "then" have too many spaces between them;
118) Under "
MAINTENANCE DOSES" [pager 16] > second paragraph > third line > the sentence beginning with the word "Most" could/should be moved back one space;
119) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 16] > first paragraph > third line > the sentence beginning with the word "Acute" could/should be moved back one space;
120) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 16] > second paragraph > second line > the words "this" and "because" have too many spaces between them;
121) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 16] > second paragraph > second line > the sentence beginning with the word "Several" could/should be moved back one space;
122) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 16] > second paragraph > third line > the sentence beginning with the word "A" could/should be moved back one space;
123) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fourth paragraph > second line > the words "I" and "would" have too many spaces between them;
124) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > the first sentence should ahve the gap removed;
125) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > line three [currently] > the sentence beginning with the word "Apparently" could/should be moved back one space;
126) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > second sentence > the words "suddenly" and "withdrawn" have too many spaces between them;
127) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > fifth line [currently] > the sentence beginning with the word "Mostly" could/should be moved back one space;
128) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > sixth line [currently] > the sentence beginning with the word "Patients" could/should be moved back one space;
129) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > seventh line [currently] > the sentence beginning with the word "Patients" could/should be moved back one space;
130) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > ninth line [currently] > the sentence beginning with the word "Maintenance" could/should be moved back one space;
131) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > tenth line [currently] > the words "patients" and "who" have too many spaces between them;
132) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > twelfth line [currently] > the words "universal" and "human" have too many spaces between them;
133) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > fifth paragraph > twelfth line [currently] > the sentence beginning with the word "Patients" could/should be moved back one space;
134) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > sixth paragraph > eighth line > the sentence beginning with the word "Patients" could/should be moved back one space;
135) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > sixth paragraph > tenth line > the sentence beginning with the word "The" could/should be moved back one space;
136) Under "
COMPLICATIONS" [pager 17] > sixth paragraph > eleventh line > the sentence beginning with the word "Patients" could/should be moved back one space;
137) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > first paragraph > second line > the sentence beginning with the word "Either" could/should be moved back one space;
138) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > first paragraph > fourth line > the sentence beginning with the word "The" could/should be moved back one space;
139) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > first paragraph > seventh line > the sentence beginning with the word "A" could/should be moved back one space;
140) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > first paragraph > ninth line > the sentence beginning with the word "Belfield" could/should be moved back one space;
141) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > first paragraph > ninth line > the words "had" and "similar" have too many spaces between them;
142) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > first paragraph > eleventh line > the sentence beginning with the word "Although" could/should be moved back one space;
143) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > third paragraph > the second sentence should have the gap eliminated;
144) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > fourth paragraph > second line > the word "Compli" and "cations" shouid be joined;
145) Under "
CONCLUSION" [pager 18] > fourth paragraph > third line > the words "nutrients" and "will" have too many spaces between them;
146) Under "
REFERENCES" [pager 19] > #6 > you may wish to align the web link with the left edge;
147) Under "
REFERENCES" [pager 19] > #9 > you may wish to align the web link with the left edge;
148) Under "
REFERENCES" [pager 19] > #32 > you may wish to align the web link with the left edge.
That turned out to be a
considerably longer project than I thought it would be
! Undoubtedly I have missed some [and may have additionally made some errors], but this should get you started.
Best,
David
JFYI, I have ingested a Bowel Tolerance dose of ascorbic acid [via one gram tablets], in HEALTH, not illness [of which I have had virtually none], basically every day since 1994, amounting to [currently], on average, 75+ grams [daily], in 10 to 15 divided doses.